{"id":2806,"date":"2014-09-25T09:30:55","date_gmt":"2014-09-25T01:30:55","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/xichuanpoetry.com\/?p=2806"},"modified":"2014-09-16T10:47:56","modified_gmt":"2014-09-16T02:47:56","slug":"notes-on-the-mosquito-at-m-dash-untranslatables","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/xichuanpoetry.com\/?p=2806","title":{"rendered":"Notes on the Mosquito at M-Dash Untranslatables"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"singleimg\"><a href=\"http:\/\/mdash-ahb.org\/2014\/09\/14\/the-untranslatables-lucas-klein\/\" target=\"_blank\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"attachment-slider-img wp-post-image alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/mdashahb.files.wordpress.com\/2014\/01\/egyptian-translator-700x428-copy1.jpg?w=700&#038;h=400&#038;crop=1&#038;resize=365%2C211\" alt=\"Egyptian Translator 700x428 copy\" width=\"365\" height=\"211\" data-recalc-dims=\"1\" \/><\/a><a href=\"http:\/\/mdash-ahb.org\/2014\/09\/14\/the-untranslatables-lucas-klein\/\" target=\"_blank\">M-Dash<\/a>, the new literary journal from Autumn Hill Books, is running a series called &#8220;The Untranslatables&#8221; &#8212; &#8220;about those\u00a0words or phrases that give us pause as translators, that stump us\u00a0and then, sometimes, enlighten us.&#8221;<\/div>\n<p>To inaugurate their feature, they invited me to contribute something from my translation of Xi Chuan&#8217;s <em>Notes on the Mosquito<\/em>. I wrote about my translation of the line <em>there is a crowd of commoners as purple as red cabbage<\/em> \u6709\u4e00\u7fa4\u767e\u59d3\u50cf\u767d\u83dc\u4e00\u6837\u7fe0\u7eff. Here&#8217;s a teaser:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>The line deals with the essences of Chinese, but with a twist. While many scholars have codified the Chinese aesthetic as metonymic and literal, the poetry of Xi Chuan\u2019s line operates by revealing the fiction in the Chinese language\u2019s conceptualization: white cabbage is not white (that it is modified by the quintessentially Chinese \u201cjade green\u201d twists the twist with even more torque) &#8230; In this instance, though, I sacrificed the insinuation about Chinese in particular to imply that all languages may contain such falsehoods and misnomers: <em>as purple as red cabbage<\/em>, because, of course, red cabbage is not red. And to reproduce the <em>po\u00efesis<\/em> of Xi Chuan\u2019s alliteration, such as with the chiasmus of \/b\/ and \/x\/ (IPA [\u0255]) and the repeated \/c\/ (IPA [ts\u02b0]) in <em>y\u01d2u y\u00ecq\u00fan <strong>b<\/strong>\u01cei<strong>x<\/strong>\u00ecng <strong>x<\/strong>i\u00e0ng <strong>b<\/strong>\u00e1i<strong>c<\/strong>\u00e0i<\/em> <em>y\u00edy\u00e0ng<\/em> <strong><em>c<\/em><\/strong><em>u\u00ecl\u01dc<\/em>, I preceded it with, <em>there is a crowd of commoners<\/em>.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Click the image above to link to the full piece.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>M-Dash, the new literary journal from Autumn Hill Books, is running a series called &#8220;The Untranslatables&#8221; &#8212; &#8220;about those\u00a0words or phrases that give us pause as translators, that stump us\u00a0and then, sometimes, enlighten us.&#8221; To inaugurate their feature, they invited &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/xichuanpoetry.com\/?p=2806\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_is_tweetstorm":false,"jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","enabled":false}}},"categories":[3,16,7],"tags":[462,1654],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p8srwF-Jg","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":2254,"url":"https:\/\/xichuanpoetry.com\/?p=2254","url_meta":{"origin":2806,"position":0},"title":"Notes on the Mosquito awarded Lucien Stryk Prize","author":"Lucas Klein","date":"October 21, 2013","format":false,"excerpt":"The 2013 Lucien Stryk Prize went to Lucas Klein for his translation of the Chinese poetry collection Notes on the Mosquito by Xi Chuan. 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